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About Me Member Deviously Annoying alicapalziFemale/Australia Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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Wow... I haven't written for ages...

Sat Feb 28, 2009, 6:46 PM
Hi, me. I haven't written for ages! I'm back at school now, High School. It's pretty good. Science sucks, and let's just say Mr. Hammond and all the rest of the music teachers aren't exactly my favourite people in the world, but hey, make the most with what you've got, right? Any way. I'm writing a story, I'll give you a preview - don't copy it! (or I'll kill you, literally and painfully)

Ben realised the bus had stopped and he stood up and grabbed the bag. On their way out the bus driver grabbed the collar of Ben’s shirt.
“You there,” he said. “What’s in that bag?” Ben looked at Lucy but she said nothing.
“Oh, you know… a sandwich… yeah… and, uh… yeah,” the bus driver looked at him, his eyebrows pulled together into a frown.
“Your sandwich is alive. Moving. Like that dog you tried to bring on earlier.” Ben tried to force a laugh.
“Is it?” he squeaked. The bus driver reached out for the bag but Lucy pushed Ben towards the door.
“Run!” they ran down the street, past the shops, and the driver ran after them.
“There’s a fine for that, kid!” he yelled. “Grab him!” he yelled. Some one grabbed onto Ben’s shirt and pulled him into an alley, then behind a bin.

Tyler grabbed Ben by the arm, but Ben resisted.
“What’s happening?” he asked. He wasn’t going anywhere.
“Long story. Run or die, Ben.” Ben began to run follow Lucy and Brian down the alley as Darcy scooped up Sandy then ran ahead. He ran so fast – it was incredible. Ben struggled to keep up with the others, even though they didn’t have the talent of speed. Lucy turned around and realised how far back Ben was. She slowed down, then grabbed Ben’s arm and tugged him. Ben felt like his legs were running so fast he was going to trip over any second. It surprised him that she had no trouble tugging him along – it didn’t seem to affect her speed in any way. They reached a brick wall at the end of the alley.
“Now what?!” Ben exclaimed, furious that they had led him here. They didn’t even answer him. Darcy ran to the bottom right corner and Ben realised that they knew the brick wall was there all along. There was a tunnel. Ben panicked. They all started climbing in, but Lucy waited for Ben.
“Are you coming, or are you just going to wait her for The Chasers to get you?” she asked, motioning him towards the tunnel. Ben was turning pale.
“Ladies first…” he mumbled.
“Hurry up!! What are you waiting for?!” her voice was getting louder.
“Nothing, nothing!” he said, but he still stood there, staring at the tunnel.
“Well, after men! Hurry!” she said. “What are you doing?”
“Well, it’s dark, and tiny, and I’m claustrophobic!” the words came out faster than a bullet. Lucy’s finger was tapping her leg frantically.
“You have to go now, Ben! You have to!” she said, glancing behind her. She knew they’d be here any second.
“I can’t!” Ben moaned.
“The others are already on the other side; I can’t fight them off by myself! You have to go, and now!” Ben bit his lip and looked into the dark hole. Three men came racing around the corner.
“There they are!” one shouted. They were in V shape. The one at the front, the one who’d shouted, was obviously the leader.
Ben groaned, then started crawling into the hole, feeling his way.
He heard a clank behind him.
“What was that?” he hissed, panicked.
“I was closing the entrance. It won’t hold them off long, so hurry!” she answered. Ben finally began to see light coming from the end. He crawled faster. He suddenly felt everything fall from underneath him.
“Lucy!” he yelled. He fell with a thud onto a concrete floor. Lucy landed lightly on her feet.
“Sorry… I forgot to warn you.” Ben scowled.

Ben scoffed down his egg and bacon sandwich greedily – he hadn’t even noticed until now, he had been so busy – he’d woken this morning thinking of Sandy being hit by a car and wanting to see Tyler again today, and now he was thinking of Tyler’s “talent” as they called it – a bit of an understatement, he thought – and he’d left to get Sandy, thinking he’d come back and get breakfast later.
“Here’s three egg and lettuce sandwiches,” a waitress said as she walked up to the table.
“That’s mine,” Brian said. The waitress handed a plate with one on it. She waited for a moment, awkwardly.
“Egg and lettuce sandwiches?” the waitress, looked at the other two sandwiches..
“Uh, yeah…” Brian admitted. “The other ones are mine too…” The waitress blushed and stifled a laugh, handing him the other one. Brian took it from the plate and put it on the first one, handing her the plate.
“I was hungry…” he explained. Lucy laughed and his ears turned cherry red.
Tyler looked at Ben with raised eyebrows.
“It’s not as bad as what he had yesterday. I nearly puked…” Ben grinned.
“Hey, I’m growing, it’s not my fault!” he said. Tyler just laughed. The waitress came back.
“One cheese and tomato toasted sandwich?”
“Yeah, that’d be-“ Lucy began, but a man walked past and bumped into the waitress, sending her flying backwards and the plate crashing to the ground. Her cheeks went red again, and she pulled herself up.
“I’m so sorry, I’m really sorry,” she said. She turned around and looked at the man that had bumped into her, who now had tomato on his business shirt, sitting on the ground, and was glaring at her.
“I’m so, so sorry!” she apologized. She put out a hand to help him up, but he ignored it, and stormed off in a rage. She awkwardly tried to laugh, but it was obvious that she wasn’t in a laughing mood.
“I’ll… uh… get you another sandwich…” she said, and sped off into the kitchen. Tyler’d been staring at her the whole time.

And that waitress was me.

  • Mood: Content
  • Listening to: love song, by taylor swift
  • Reading: twilight
  • Watching: nothing
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: if chocolate is offered......
  • Drinking: if lemonade was available i'd drink that

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:iconsanii-chan:
FAKE FRIENDS: Never ask for food.
REAL FRIENDS: Is the reason you have no food.

FAKE FRIENDS: Call your parents Mr / Mrs
REAL FRIENDS: Call your parents DAD/MOM

FAKE FRIENDS: Never seen you cry
REAL FRIENDS: Cry with you

FAKE FRIENDS: Borrow your stuff for a few days then give it back
REAL FRIENDS: Keep your stuff so long they forget it's yours

FAKE FRIENDS: Know a few things about you
REAL FRIENDS: Could write a book about you with direct quotes from
you

FAKE FRIENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing
REAL FRIENDS: Will kick the whole crowds butt that left you

FAKE FRIENDS: Would knock on your front door
REAL FRIENDS: Walk right in and say 'I'M HOME!'

FAKE FRIENDS: Are for awhile
REAL FRIENDS: Are for life

FAKE FRIENDS: Will talk bad to the person who talks bad about you.
REAL FRIENDS: Will knock the person out that talked bad about you

FAKE FRIENDS: Would ignore this
REAL FRIENDS: Will send this to all their real friends and hope to
get it back!

my edition:
FAKE FRIENDS: pretend to be awesome
REAL FRIENDS: are awesome!


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ROFLMAO - Roll on floor laughing my ass off.
ROFLWTIME- Roll on floor laughing with tears in my eyes.
ROFLMAOWTIME- Roll on floor laughing my ass off with tears in my eyes
:iconnotsogoodartist:
wow!!! thank you for adding my work on ur faves... ^_^ hihihi kisses ^^,
:iconhawkfire-the-cat:
Is this the person who came up with "yokouuuuuuuuuuuunoooo, rawk da wurooerld"
-translates to: yokono, rock the world

GO 2 MWA PAGE!! LLAMA!! :llama:

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:iconalicapalzi:
Yes. I came up with that. It was much cooler than it sounds. Trust me.

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I'm awesome. And cool. If you're not then buzz off. By the way. 99% of people who put statistics in their signatures are not cool or awesome. Only decimal 0000000000000000000000000000000000000001%
are both. That is me.
:iconhawkfire-the-cat:
WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!WATCHMEANDFAVALLAMAHSTUFF!!

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:iconalicapalzi:
my tooth hurts...


well, where my tooth used to be.
:iconsanii-chan:
yay!

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I am not an emo, I am Emo.
:dummy:◕ ◡ ◕:la:
ROFLMAO - Roll on floor laughing my ass off.
ROFLWTIME- Roll on floor laughing with tears in my eyes.
ROFLMAOWTIME- Roll on floor laughing my ass off with tears in my eyes
:iconalicapalzi:
my mouth hurts. i'll have to brush around where the tooth was pulled out...


owwww..... :(
:iconsanii-chan:
lol y did u get ur tooth pulled out?

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I am not an emo, I am Emo.
:dummy:◕ ◡ ◕:la:
ROFLMAO - Roll on floor laughing my ass off.
ROFLWTIME- Roll on floor laughing with tears in my eyes.
ROFLMAOWTIME- Roll on floor laughing my ass off with tears in my eyes

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